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 ### Purpose: Scenario teaching family authority, succession control, legal capacity, military obligation, inheritance risk, and conflict between personal merit and dynastic expectation.
 ### Repository Path: docs/scenarios/DIALOGUE-LAW-0003.md
 
+## 0. Framing Note
+
+This dialogue models historical legal processes as they functioned in practice.
+It does not endorse coercion, inequality, or harm.
+It presents how participants operate within existing structures.
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 ## 0. Design Intent
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 - father can void terms or cannot
 - commission expected or common rank chosen
 - genuine principle or youthful theatre
-- rivals already exploiting succession doubt
+- rivals already act uponing succession doubt
 - heir intends return or exile through glory
 
 The participant must learn that powerful families treat heirs as assets, while ambitious heirs may claim personhood at cost.
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 | Choice | Background |
 |---|---|
 | Follow Varro to test whether resolve survives reality. | Former Legionary |
-| Follow Felix to exploit panic, prestige, and succession rumors. | Freedman Trader |
+| Follow Felix to act upon panic, prestige, and succession rumors. | Freedman Trader |
 | Follow Lentulus to track noble alliances and family reactions. | Noble Younger Son |
 | Follow Crispus to inspect filings, authority, and legal capacity. | Failed Magistrate |
 | Follow Secundus to judge military truth against romantic ambition. | Camp Logistician |
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 - Public praise can limit private control.
 - Military service can be merit-seeking or status theatre.
 - Succession uncertainty changes alliances immediately.
-- Wills may become weapons faster than swords.
+- Wills may become leverages faster than swords.
 
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