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# DIALOGUE-LAW-0001
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## The Fallen Beam — Canonical Draft
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### Status: Canonical Dialogue Draft
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### Layer: OTIVM (Roman Law)
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### Purpose: Opening law-phase scenario teaching status conversion, debt bondage, contractual obligation, liability after workplace death, family exposure, standing to sue, and the difference between justice and enforceability.
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### Repository Path: docs/scenarios/DIALOGUE-LAW-0001.md
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## 0. Design Intent
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A former merchant of Ostia entered bondage under debt arrangement to shield his household from creditors.
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Three weeks later, while laboring in a contracted demolition, he was crushed by a falling beam.
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No riot has begun. No magistrate has ruled. No property burned.
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Yet creditors gather, the contractor blames chance, the owner claims loss, the widow asks whether promises still stand, and neighbors debate whether a dead man completed his bargain.
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Known facts are uncertain:
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- was the site negligent or merely dangerous
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- did the debt arrangement free his family fully or partly
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- was he purchased as labor, time, or collateral
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- did the owner breach duties of care
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- can anyone sue with standing
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- will anyone powerful care enough to act
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The participant must learn that law often decides what a death means economically.
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## 1. Scene Constraints
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Location: street outside a timber yard and partially demolished warehouse in Ostia, late morning after funeral rites.
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Primary signals:
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- broken beam still visible inside site
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- widow speaking with two creditors
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- contractor loudly denying fault
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- laborers whispering about unsafe orders
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- scribe offering to inspect documents
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- crowd discussing whether debt survives
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Selection method: participant chooses whose interpretation to follow.
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---
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## 2. Opening Scene Draft
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The beam that killed him still lay where it had fallen.
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One end rested in dust and broken tile. The other pinned a smashed handcart nobody had yet bothered to move. Men pointed at it with confidence they had lacked yesterday.
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Marcus Atilius Varro stood at the yard gate watching workers avoid the place where death had become expensive.
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Lucius Fabius Felix arrived smiling less than usual and only because tragedy still traded.
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“No fire. No flood. No edict,” Felix said. “Only a corpse and six arguments.”
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Varro looked toward the widow.
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“Eight arguments.”
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Felix counted two creditors, a contractor, a steward, the widow, three neighbors.
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“Good. The city still multiplies.”
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Gaius Licinius Crispus approached with deliberate gravity.
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“Has any official seal been placed on the site?”
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Felix answered first.
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“Only dust.”
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Crispus ignored him.
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“No closure,” Varro said. “Work resumed at dawn in the rear wall.”
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“Predictable,” Crispus said.
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Quintus Cornelius Lentulus Minor arrived beneath a restrained cloak suitable for sympathy at moderate distance.
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“I knew the man by sight,” Lentulus said. “He sold lamp oil once.”
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Felix nodded.
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“And later sold himself.”
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“That is coarse.”
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“That is sequence.”
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Titus Varenus Secundus emerged from inside the yard carrying a split wedge of oak.
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“Bad staging,” he said. “Beam should have been braced twice.”
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Varro turned.
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“Certain?”
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Secundus held up the wedge.
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“This was cracked before yesterday.”
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A quiet voice came from beside the widow.
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“And still charged at full quality.”
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Publius Terentius Chresimus stood with two tablets already open.
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Felix sighed.
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“Even grief acquires accounting.”
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“It arrived with accounting,” Chresimus said.
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The widow was arguing with a narrow man in clean sandals.
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“You said the debt was ended!”
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He replied:
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“I said reduced according to term.”
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Half the crowd leaned closer.
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Varro said, “There.”
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“What?” Lentulus asked.
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“The real body.”
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Crispus nodded reluctantly.
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“The contract.”
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The contractor shouted from the yard entrance:
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“He ignored orders! Entered before signal!”
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A laborer muttered loudly enough to be heard:
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“No signal was given.”
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The contractor suddenly discovered other business.
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Felix smiled.
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“Witnesses ripen quickly in sunlight.”
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Lentulus frowned.
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“If the man entered bondage lawfully, his owner bears some duty.”
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Felix looked impressed.
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“Education survives breeding.”
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Crispus said, “Duty depends on form. If leased labor through contractor, burdens split.”
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Chresimus added:
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“If documents exist.”
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Secundus pointed toward the beam.
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“Documents do not brace timber.”
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Varro almost smiled.
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A second creditor arrived carrying an older tablet and greater confidence.
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He announced that household utensils remained pledged.
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The widow said the husband entered bondage precisely to prevent that.
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The creditor replied:
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“Then we must determine whether he completed performance.”
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The crowd made the low sound crowds make when cruelty speaks politely.
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Felix said softly:
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“There is your lesson.”
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“Can they truly argue this?”
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“They can argue anything. Success costs extra.”
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Chresimus examined one tablet.
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“Interesting.”
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“What?” Varro asked.
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“The debt amount differs between copies.”
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Felix laughed once.
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“At last. Civilization.”
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Secundus crouched beside the beam scar.
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“See scrape marks. They moved support posts after loading.”
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Varro said, “To save time?”
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“To save wood.”
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Crispus looked toward the contractor.
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“If proven, negligence strengthens claim.”
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“Whose claim?” Felix asked.
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The question sat in the dust.
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“The widow.”
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Crispus shook his head.
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“Not certain.”
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“The family.”
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“Not certain.”
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“The dead man’s kin.”
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“Depends.”
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Felix spread his hands.
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“There. Law enters.”
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Chresimus said, “Owner may claim loss of purchased labor value.”
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Lentulus said, “Absurd.”
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“Common,” Chresimus replied.
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Secundus muttered:
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“Then buy oxen instead.”
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A laborer approached quietly.
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“He complained yesterday.”
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“About what?” Varro asked.
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“Loose joints. Said roof leaned wrong.”
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“Will you testify?” Crispus asked.
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The man looked at the contractor, then at his hungry sandals.
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“How much does truth pay?”
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Felix admired him openly.
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“A philosopher.”
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The widow began crying not loudly, but efficiently.
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“Pressure works.”
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Chresimus nodded.
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“Public sympathy lowers collection appetite.”
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Felix said, “Temporarily.”
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“My household could intervene.”
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“Out of virtue?”
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“Out of order.”
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“More believable.”
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Crispus asked, “What exactly did he sign?”
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Chresimus lifted a copy.
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“Not enough. It states service until debt satisfaction under valuation schedule.”
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Secundus said, “Meaning?”
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“It means everyone will claim meaning.”
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The contractor returned with sudden confidence.
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“The man was warned. Many heard it.”
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No one nearby had.
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Varro asked, “Who owns the yard?”
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“A partnership.”
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“Named?”
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The contractor hesitated.
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Felix smiled slowly.
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“There.”
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“What?” Lentulus asked.
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“The next corpse.”
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Crispus straightened.
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“If partnership assets touched this, records matter greatly.”
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A clerk from the magistrate’s office appeared at the lane mouth.
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He announced no hearing had been ordered, but complaints could be submitted in proper form with fee.
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The crowd began speaking again, angrier and poorer.
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Felix said, “And now justice has admission price.”
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Crispus replied sharply.
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“Procedure has cost.”
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“Same gate.”
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Varro asked, “What matters now?”
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Secundus answered first.
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“Who saw the supports moved.”
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Lentulus said, “Who shields the widow.”
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Crispus said, “Who has standing and coin to file.”
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Felix said, “Who settles fastest from fear.”
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Chresimus said, “What the contract valued.”
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“If he sold time, debt remains partly. If labor output, maybe remains mostly. If person entirely, owner claims loss. Words decide grief.”
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“I’ll find men who saw yesterday.”
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“I’ll inspect the staging and timber.”
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Lentulus adjusted his cloak.
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“I will speak with the widow before creditors do.”
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“I will determine viable claims.”
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“I will discover how cheaply certainty can be bought.”
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“I will compare every copy of every promise.”
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“Six men. One dead merchant. None of us discussing mourning.”
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> The man is buried. His obligations are not. Whose reading of the yard do you trust?
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| Follow Varro to locate witnesses and practical facts. | Former Legionary |
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| Follow Felix to exploit fear, settlement, and creditor panic. | Freedman Trader |
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| Follow Lentulus to shield the widow through patronage and status. | Noble Younger Son |
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| Follow Crispus to test standing, filings, and liability. | Failed Magistrate |
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| Follow Secundus to inspect the site, supports, and negligence. | Camp Logistician |
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| Follow Chresimus to decode contracts, copies, and debt meaning. | Guild Scribe |
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then this dialogue is functioning correctly.
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