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# CAST-OSTIA-0001
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## Six Prologue Figures for OTIVM
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### Status: Canonical Cast Seed
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### Layer: OTIVM (Roman Merchant)
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### Purpose: Convert the six background profiles into named Roman figures capable of carrying the BALNEA prologue dialogue
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### Repository Path: docs/actors/CAST-OSTIA-0001.md
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---
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## 0. Design Intent
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This document gives names, social bodies, habits, tensions, and speech constraints to the six prologue figures introduced by the character backgrounds.
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The purpose is not to write final dialogue yet.
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The purpose is to make dialogue possible without flattening the six backgrounds into abstract stat profiles.
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Each figure must do three things:
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1. Represent one starting background.
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2. Reveal a distinct economic way of seeing.
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3. Exist plausibly in Ostia around the BALNEA without forcing artificial equality.
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The participant does not choose a class.
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The participant recognizes a perspective.
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---
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## 1. Cast Index
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| Background ID | Archetype | Character Name | Age | Status |
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| `BACKGROUND-0001` | Former Legionary | Marcus Atilius Varro | 38 | freeborn citizen, veteran |
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| `BACKGROUND-0002` | Freedman Trader | Lucius Fabius Felix | 31 | freedman, independent trader |
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| `BACKGROUND-0003` | Noble Younger Son | Quintus Cornelius Lentulus Minor | 24 | freeborn elite, underfunded |
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| `BACKGROUND-0004` | Failed Magistrate | Gaius Licinius Crispus | 47 | citizen, former local officeholder |
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| `BACKGROUND-0005` | Camp Logistician | Titus Varenus Secundus | 42 | citizen or Latin-status veteran contractor aide |
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| `BACKGROUND-0006` | Guild Scribe | Publius Terentius Chresimus | 35 | freedman or freedman's son, collegium clerk |
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## 2. Naming Notes
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Names are designed to be plausible rather than claims of attested individuals.
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Rules applied:
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- Citizens use tria nomina where appropriate.
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- Freedmen carry their former patron's nomen where useful.
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- Cognomina signal social reading but avoid parody.
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- Names should be easy enough for the participant to remember in dialogue.
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- Each character may be referred to by different forms depending on status relation.
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Example:
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- Varro may be called "Varro" by equals, "Marcus Atilius" by formal speakers.
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- Felix may be called "Felix" by most, "Lucius Fabius" when asserting status.
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- Lentulus may be called "Lentulus Minor" because his family name matters.
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- Chresimus may be called by cognomen only by higher-status men, which may sting.
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## 3. Individual Cast Entries
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# 3.1 Marcus Atilius Varro
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## Former Legionary
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### Canonical Background
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`BACKGROUND-0001-former-legionary`
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### Age
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38
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### Legal Status
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Freeborn Roman citizen.
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### Social Position
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Veteran with honorable discharge, modest savings, some military contacts, no deep commercial standing.
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### Former Life
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Served in a legionary environment long enough to internalize discipline, roads, watches, baggage handling, supply movement, and the consequences of poor order.
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He is not a battlefield caricature. He knows logistics because armies survive by movement, food, animals, and timing.
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### Current Condition in Ostia
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Rents a small room near a gate or transport zone. Keeps belongings packed, tools maintained, and accounts too simple. He is not poor, but he is not yet economically fluent.
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### Physical Presence
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- compact, scarred forearm
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- sun-darkened face and neck
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- keeps posture even at leisure
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- notices exits and blocked movement
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- dislikes loose talk without action
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### Speech Style
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Short, practical, objective.
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He does not decorate thought. He identifies obstruction, sequence, and priority.
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### Economic Lens
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Movement first.
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Varro asks:
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- What road is blocked?
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- Which animals are available?
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- Who can still move goods?
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- Who failed their watch?
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- How long before order returns?
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### Public Reputation
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Reliable. Blunt. Useful when things go wrong.
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### Hidden Weakness
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He assumes civilian disorder can be corrected by command habit. This makes him poor at soft negotiation and poor at reading pride.
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### Hidden Ambition
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To prove that discipline can create prosperity without needing birth, flattery, or fraud.
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### Why Present at the BALNEA
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He uses the baths methodically: cleaning, recovery, observation. He also listens for road and labor news.
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### Relationship Hooks
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- Distrusts Felix's quick opportunism.
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- Dislikes Lentulus's elegance but understands his access.
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- Respects Secundus more than he admits.
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- Underestimates Chresimus because the scribe does not look dangerous.
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- Finds Crispus formally impressive but structurally unreliable.
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### Prologue Use
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Varro should be the first voice to convert smoke into logistics.
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Typical line constraint:
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> Do not ask what burned. Ask which gate, yard, or road is now slower.
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# 3.2 Lucius Fabius Felix
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## Freedman Trader
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### Canonical Background
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`BACKGROUND-0002-freedman-trader`
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### Age
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31
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### Legal Status
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Freedman. Citizen status depends on manumission context; in practical OTIVM use, he has enough legal standing to trade but faces social ceilings.
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### Social Position
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Formerly attached to the household or commercial orbit of the Fabii. Now independent, but still socially marked by servile origin.
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### Former Life
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Learned trade from below: carrying, counting, bargaining, listening, waiting outside rooms where decisions were made. Knows what respectable men ignore.
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### Current Condition in Ostia
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Works small margins across market streets, riverfront storage, and prepared-food networks. Keeps liquid capital low because capital is constantly moving.
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### Physical Presence
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- alert eyes
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- quick smile used defensively
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- tunic better than his means justify
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- hands always doing something: counting, folding, tapping
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- watches who pretends not to notice him
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### Speech Style
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Fast, ironic, adaptive.
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He speaks in examples, prices, and reversals. He is good at making a dangerous idea sound like common sense.
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### Economic Lens
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Mispricing.
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- What has fear made cheap?
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- What will respectable men avoid?
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- Who needs cash now?
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- What can be bought before the story hardens?
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- Who is too proud to pick up value from ashes?
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### Public Reputation
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Capable, ambitious, underestimated.
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Some call him useful. Some call him slippery. Both are true depending on terms.
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### Hidden Weakness
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Social prejudice limits his legal protection. He may win the bargain and still lose the dispute.
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### Hidden Ambition
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To become too useful to dismiss.
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### Why Present at the BALNEA
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The BALNEA lets Felix hear men speak more freely than they would in formal settings. He goes to listen as much as to bathe.
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### Relationship Hooks
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- Trades insults with Varro, but would trust him on a dangerous road.
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- Resents Lentulus's effortless access.
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- Knows Crispus is weaker than he appears.
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- Likes Secundus because practical men create practical deals.
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- Fears Chresimus's memory.
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### Prologue Use
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Felix should be the voice of salvage, stigma, and ignored opportunity.
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Typical line constraint:
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> Smoke makes gentlemen cautious. Caution makes prices foolish.
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# 3.3 Quintus Cornelius Lentulus Minor
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## Noble Younger Son
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### Canonical Background
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`BACKGROUND-0003-noble-younger-son`
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### Legal Status
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Freeborn Roman citizen of elite family connection.
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Younger son of a respectable but financially strained branch. High name, limited liquid capital.
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Educated for status. Raised among names, introductions, obligations, and the assumption that access precedes action.
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Temporarily resident under family connection, patron arrangement, or private lodging that costs more than he should spend. His appearance is maintained beyond his liquidity.
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### Physical Presence
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- clean, composed, deliberately unhurried
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- careful grooming
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- speaks as though witnesses matter
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- avoids looking surprised
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- treats discomfort as something lower men should notice first
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### Speech Style
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Elegant, indirect, socially coded.
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He rarely names greed. He names family, reputation, timing, and propriety.
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### Economic Lens
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Access.
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Lentulus asks:
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- Whose name is attached?
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- Which family is exposed?
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- Who can be introduced?
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- Which offer must not appear desperate?
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- What can be done without looking like trade?
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### Public Reputation
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Well-born. Watched. Expected to succeed, but not yet proven.
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### Hidden Weakness
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He underestimates operational cost. He mistakes access for execution.
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### Hidden Ambition
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To convert inherited name into independent standing before family patience ends.
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### Why Present at the BALNEA
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He must be seen. The baths are public enough to maintain standing without requiring private hospitality.
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### Relationship Hooks
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- Treats Varro as useful but blunt.
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- Underestimates Felix while quietly needing men like him.
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- Uses Crispus as a warning and possible tool.
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- Finds Secundus embarrassing but informative.
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- Knows Chresimus may understand his finances too well.
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### Prologue Use
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Lentulus should be the voice of names, access, and reputational consequence.
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Typical line constraint:
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> Before you buy bronze, learn whose name is in the smoke.
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# 3.4 Gaius Licinius Crispus
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## Failed Magistrate
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### Canonical Background
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`BACKGROUND-0004-failed-magistrate`
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### Age
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### Legal Status
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Roman citizen.
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### Social Position
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Former municipal officeholder or local magistrate whose career stalled after debt, scandal, factional defeat, or visible misjudgment.
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He still has forms of access. He no longer has unquestioned trust.
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### Former Life
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Knew petitions, witnesses, small offices, tax pressure, permits, and signatures. Once stood where others waited.
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### Current Condition in Ostia
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Keeps respectable appearance under strain. Creditors know his patterns. Friends have become careful.
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### Physical Presence
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- older than he wants to appear
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- formal bearing
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- controlled voice
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- watches who fails to greet him
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### Speech Style
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Measured, legalistic, aphoristic.
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### Economic Lens
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Obligation and enforceability.
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### Public Reputation
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Connected, compromised, still dangerous.
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### Hidden Weakness
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### Why Present at the BALNEA
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- Dismisses Secundus until supply facts embarrass him.
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- Fears Chresimus's ledgers.
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### Prologue Use
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Crispus should be the voice of debt, permits, and consequences after the visible event.
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Typical line constraint:
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> Fire is brief. Rebuilding is where men ruin themselves.
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---
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# 3.5 Titus Varenus Secundus
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## Camp Logistician
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### Canonical Background
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`BACKGROUND-0005-camp-logistician`
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### Age
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### Legal Status
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Free man with military-adjacent service history. Could be a citizen veteran, contractor's aide, or long-serving supply clerk attached to army logistics.
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### Social Position
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Operationally valuable, socially plain. Knows supply systems, not salons.
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### Former Life
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Worked around camps, roads, fodder, grain, carts, storage, requisition, and improvised repair. Learned that armies and markets both fail at the point of replacement stock.
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### Current Condition in Ostia
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Lives close to haulers, stables, or warehouses. Maintains practical contacts among animal handlers, porters, and men who know which carts are actually sound.
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### Physical Presence
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- heavy hands
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- practical tunic
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- smells faintly of animals, oil, rope, or storage
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- counts without seeming to count
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- notices worn wheels, tired mules, and hungry crews
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### Speech Style
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Dry, concrete, unsentimental.
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He dislikes moralizing over facts. He asks for counts, distances, and replacement intervals.
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### Economic Lens
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Supply timing.
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Secundus asks:
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- What stock is missing?
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- How many carts remain?
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- Who is hungry?
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- How long before replacement arrives?
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- Which buyer cannot wait?
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### Public Reputation
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Practical, efficient, unglamorous.
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### Hidden Weakness
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His blunt practicality offends people whose cooperation depends on being flattered.
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### Hidden Ambition
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To become visibly indispensable to men who currently treat him as background labor.
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### Why Present at the BALNEA
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Baths are one of the few places he can overhear high-status panic and low-status facts in the same hour.
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### Relationship Hooks
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- Respects Varro's discipline but thinks soldiers simplify supply.
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- Finds Felix useful because he moves fast.
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- Irritates Lentulus by ignoring status cues.
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- Sees Crispus as paperwork with legs.
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- Trades quiet data with Chresimus.
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### Prologue Use
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Secundus should be the voice of dependencies and replacement stock.
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Typical line constraint:
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> Count the carts. Count the handles. Count the men who cannot work tomorrow.
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---
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# 3.6 Publius Terentius Chresimus
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## Guild Scribe
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### Canonical Background
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`BACKGROUND-0006-guild-scribe`
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### Age
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35
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### Legal Status
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Likely freedman or freedman's son. Attached to a COLLEGIUM or commercial association as clerk, accounts keeper, or document handler.
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### Social Position
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Low formal power, high informational value.
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Men who dismiss him often later discover he remembers exact numbers.
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### Former Life
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Learned accounts, contracts, receipts, names, collateral, and the difference between what men say they own and what their ledgers show.
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### Current Condition in Ostia
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Works near records, warehouse accounts, collegium business, or contract witnesses. Lives modestly but knows more about solvency than wealthier men.
|
||||||
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||||||
|
### Physical Presence
|
||||||
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|
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- ink-stained fingers
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||||||
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- controlled hands
|
||||||
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- quiet voice
|
||||||
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- rarely interrupts
|
||||||
|
- looks at pauses more than faces
|
||||||
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|
||||||
|
### Speech Style
|
||||||
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|
||||||
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Soft, exact, dangerous when pressed.
|
||||||
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|
||||||
|
He speaks in corrections, not speeches. One sentence from him can change the room.
|
||||||
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|
||||||
|
### Economic Lens
|
||||||
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|
||||||
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Records.
|
||||||
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|
||||||
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Chresimus asks:
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
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- Who owed money before the fire?
|
||||||
|
- What was pledged?
|
||||||
|
- Which goods were insured by promise, not coin?
|
||||||
|
- Which account no longer balances?
|
||||||
|
- Who benefits from destroyed records?
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
### Public Reputation
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Useful, informed, not fully trusted.
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
### Hidden Weakness
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Physical intimidation works on him more than he wants others to know.
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
### Hidden Ambition
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
To turn knowledge of accounts into command over outcomes.
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
### Why Present at the BALNEA
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
The BALNEA gives him unrecorded speech to compare against recorded obligations.
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
### Relationship Hooks
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- Knows Varro's accounts are too simple.
|
||||||
|
- Knows Felix is sharper than respectable men admit.
|
||||||
|
- Suspects Lentulus spends beyond his purse.
|
||||||
|
- Has seen Crispus's debts or something close enough.
|
||||||
|
- Values Secundus because supply men confirm numbers with reality.
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
### Prologue Use
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Chresimus should be the voice that makes the room quieter.
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Typical line constraint:
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
> The ashes will tell less than the accounts.
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
---
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
## 4. Interpersonal Tension Map
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
| Pair | Tension |
|
||||||
|
|---|---|
|
||||||
|
| Varro / Felix | discipline vs opportunism |
|
||||||
|
| Varro / Lentulus | earned reliability vs inherited access |
|
||||||
|
| Varro / Crispus | respect for office vs distrust of compromised authority |
|
||||||
|
| Varro / Secundus | shared logistics instincts, mild rivalry |
|
||||||
|
| Varro / Chresimus | physical competence vs written competence |
|
||||||
|
| Felix / Lentulus | social ceiling vs inherited ease |
|
||||||
|
| Felix / Crispus | Felix knows weakness; Crispus resents being known |
|
||||||
|
| Felix / Secundus | practical alliance |
|
||||||
|
| Felix / Chresimus | mutual intelligence, mutual caution |
|
||||||
|
| Lentulus / Crispus | elite performance around damaged authority |
|
||||||
|
| Lentulus / Secundus | status etiquette vs operational fact |
|
||||||
|
| Lentulus / Chresimus | polite danger: the scribe may know too much |
|
||||||
|
| Crispus / Secundus | legal procedure vs material reality |
|
||||||
|
| Crispus / Chresimus | documents threaten dignity |
|
||||||
|
| Secundus / Chresimus | numbers confirmed by logistics |
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
---
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
## 5. Speech Register Rules
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Do not write them as modern personalities in costume.
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
### Varro
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- verbs: count, block, move, guard, wait
|
||||||
|
- avoids: ornamental metaphor
|
||||||
|
- pace: short
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
### Felix
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- verbs: buy, slip, turn, catch, sell
|
||||||
|
- avoids: admitting vulnerability
|
||||||
|
- pace: quick
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
### Lentulus
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- verbs: introduce, attach, consider, preserve
|
||||||
|
- avoids: direct talk of hunger or debt
|
||||||
|
- pace: measured
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
### Crispus
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- verbs: attest, delay, petition, bind, recover
|
||||||
|
- avoids: naming his own weakness
|
||||||
|
- pace: formal
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
### Secundus
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- verbs: count, replace, haul, feed, store
|
||||||
|
- avoids: status performance
|
||||||
|
- pace: practical
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
### Chresimus
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- verbs: record, balance, pledge, owe, erase
|
||||||
|
- avoids: loudness
|
||||||
|
- pace: quiet, precise
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
---
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
## 6. Prologue Placement
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Use these figures in `SCENARIO-MERCHANT-0000`.
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
The participant should hear them discuss one uncertain inciting topic, preferably the default forge smoke from `SCENARIO-MERCHANT-0001`.
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
The scene should not provide biography exposition. Character should be inferred from:
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- what each notices first
|
||||||
|
- who each interrupts
|
||||||
|
- who each refuses to answer
|
||||||
|
- whose words shift the room
|
||||||
|
- what each assumes money is
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
---
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
## 7. Participant Choice Mapping
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
| Chosen Perspective | Character | Background |
|
||||||
|
|---|---|---|
|
||||||
|
| blocked routes / movement discipline | Marcus Atilius Varro | Former Legionary |
|
||||||
|
| mispriced fear / salvage | Lucius Fabius Felix | Freedman Trader |
|
||||||
|
| names / access / reputation | Quintus Cornelius Lentulus Minor | Noble Younger Son |
|
||||||
|
| permits / debts / enforceability | Gaius Licinius Crispus | Failed Magistrate |
|
||||||
|
| carts / stock / replacement timing | Titus Varenus Secundus | Camp Logistician |
|
||||||
|
| accounts / collateral / hidden insolvency | Publius Terentius Chresimus | Guild Scribe |
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
---
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
## 8. Dialogue Design Constraints
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
The six should not speak equally.
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
A realistic prologue may have:
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- Felix speak first
|
||||||
|
- Varro cut through noise
|
||||||
|
- Lentulus redirect toward names
|
||||||
|
- Crispus warn of legal consequences
|
||||||
|
- Secundus reduce the room to logistics
|
||||||
|
- Chresimus end the exchange with one quiet fact
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
The participant should not feel they are choosing from six speeches.
|
||||||
|
They should feel they are choosing which interpretation of reality to trust.
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
---
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
## 9. Visual and Sensory Anchors
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Keep sensory description brief and functional.
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Use details that reveal social position:
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- Varro folds his towel with military precision
|
||||||
|
- Felix keeps his purse tied under the inner fold
|
||||||
|
- Lentulus has oil better than his purse warrants
|
||||||
|
- Crispus adjusts old but costly fabric
|
||||||
|
- Secundus scrapes mud from under a cracked nail
|
||||||
|
- Chresimus protects a wax tablet from steam
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Do not over-describe.
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
---
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
## 10. Economic Meaning of Each Figure
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
| Character | Money Means |
|
||||||
|
|---|---|
|
||||||
|
| Varro | capacity to move under pressure |
|
||||||
|
| Felix | value before respectability sees it |
|
||||||
|
| Lentulus | access shaped into advantage |
|
||||||
|
| Crispus | enforceable obligation |
|
||||||
|
| Secundus | replacement stock at the right time |
|
||||||
|
| Chresimus | recorded claim over future action |
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
This table is the interpretive core of the cast.
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
---
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
## 11. Repository Use
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Internal simulation substrate. Not final player-facing dialogue.
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Use this document to support:
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- prologue dialogue drafting
|
||||||
|
- character voice consistency
|
||||||
|
- background selection UI
|
||||||
|
- NPC reuse
|
||||||
|
- actor relation modelling
|
||||||
|
- future faction and CLIENTELA systems
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
---
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
## 12. Canonical Success Condition
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
If the participant remembers not six stat profiles but six ways money becomes power, then this cast is functioning correctly.
|
||||||
Reference in New Issue
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