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# DIALOGUE-PROLOGUE-0009
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## The Funeral of a Patron — Canonical Draft
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### Status: Canonical Dialogue Draft
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### Layer: OTIVM (Roman Merchant)
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### Purpose: Prologue scenario teaching patronage networks, inheritance uncertainty, status realignment, dependent livelihoods, and opportunity created when a powerful household loses its center.
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### Repository Path: docs/scenarios/DIALOGUE-PROLOGUE-0009.md
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---
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## 0. Design Intent
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A wealthy patron of Ostia has died.
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No market burns. No ship sinks. No law changes.
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Yet clients gather, creditors recalculate, dependents panic, suppliers wait, rivals visit politely, and every promise made in his lifetime becomes uncertain in death.
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Known facts are uncertain:
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- valid will or contested will
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- heir competent or weak
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- debts larger than believed
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- gifts promised but unwritten
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- household retainers dismissed or retained
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- rivals preparing to absorb clients
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The participant must learn that one death can move an entire commercial district.
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---
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## 1. Scene Constraints
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Location: street outside an elite domus where funeral preparations are underway, Ostia, late morning.
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Primary signals:
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- clients gathering in formal dress
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- suppliers waiting unpaid
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- freedmen household staff whispering
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- mourning drapery hung
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- scribes summoned
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- rival visitors arriving with excellent timing
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Selection method: participant chooses whose interpretation to follow.
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---
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## 2. Opening Scene Draft
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The street smelled of cedar smoke, lamp oil, wet wool, and expectation.
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Dark cloth had been hung across the doorway of the domus. Clients lined the street in careful sandals, each man dressed to display grief at a useful level.
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Two mule carts carrying flowers waited behind a wagon carrying account tablets.
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Marcus Atilius Varro stood where he could see the entrance, the servants’ side gate, and the road.
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Lucius Fabius Felix arrived carrying a wreath small enough to be sincere and cheap enough to be honest.
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“You chose a cheerful gathering,” Felix said.
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“I chose a queue,” Varro answered.
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Felix looked at the clients.
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“A queue dressed as loyalty.”
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Gaius Licinius Crispus approached already solemn.
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“Mind your tongue,” he said. “The dead commanded respect.”
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“The dead command less each hour,” Felix replied.
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Crispus frowned.
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“You mistake cynicism for intelligence.”
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“No. I mistake mourning for negotiation.”
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Quintus Cornelius Lentulus Minor arrived in black-edged clothing that had plainly been selected by someone expensive.
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“This house deserves proper conduct,” Lentulus said.
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Felix bowed slightly.
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“Then you should enter first and demonstrate it.”
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“I likely shall.”
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Titus Varenus Secundus came from beside the stable yard, wiping rainwater from a harness buckle.
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“The kitchen dismissed three suppliers at dawn,” he said.
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Varro turned.
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“Which?”
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“Fish, vegetables, lamp oil.”
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Felix smiled.
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“There. Grief already bargains.”
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A quiet voice came from behind the wagon of tablets.
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“Or lacks coin.”
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Publius Terentius Chresimus stepped into view carrying wax tablets tied with cord.
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Felix sighed.
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“And death becomes accurate.”
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Chresimus looked toward the doorway.
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“The household paid wages late last month.”
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Crispus stiffened.
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“Source?”
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“The men who accepted them late.”
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Lentulus said, “Late wages do not imply weakness.”
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“No,” Chresimus said. “They imply timing. Weakness is a separate question.”
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A woman inside the house began wailing with professional stamina.
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Half the clients lowered their eyes.
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Felix counted them quietly.
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“Twenty-seven clients visible. Six merchants pretending not to be clients. Three rivals.”
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Varro asked, “How many guards?”
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“Two bored. One competent.”
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Secundus nodded.
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“Stable has only four animals left.”
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Lentulus looked displeased.
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“You inspected their stable during mourning?”
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“I inspected shortages.”
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Varro almost smiled.
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“Good answer.”
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Crispus folded his hands.
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“If the will is read today, order may hold.”
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Felix laughed.
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“If there is one.”
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“There is always one.”
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“There is always a claim that there was one.”
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Chresimus added softly:
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“And often two copies.”
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The street shifted as a litter arrived.
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Men straightened instantly.
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Lentulus recognized the crest first.
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“The Sabini cousins.”
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Felix said, “Condolence has arrived wearing appetite.”
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Crispus said, “They have standing.”
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“They have timing,” Felix replied.
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Varro watched the servants’ gate.
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“Porters carrying chests out.”
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Secundus looked.
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“Household silver? Clothing trunks. Fast movement.”
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Lentulus said, “Routine rearrangement.”
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Felix stared at him.
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“You are a treasure.”
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Chresimus said, “Or collateral leaving before inventory.”
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Crispus turned sharply.
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“That would be unlawful.”
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“That has never prevented it.”
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A young man emerged briefly at the doorway, pale, overdressed, and immediately surrounded by advisors.
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Lentulus inhaled once.
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“The heir.”
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Felix asked, “Competent?”
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Lentulus watched carefully.
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“Nervous.”
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“Same question.”
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Secundus said, “Hands soft.”
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Varro said, “Posture collapses under touch.”
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Crispus said, “Still lawful heir unless displaced.”
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Chresimus said, “Unless debt outruns inheritance.”
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The clients began murmuring in clusters.
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Some drifted subtly toward the arriving cousins.
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Felix pointed.
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“There. Loyalty changing shoes.”
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Varro said, “If clients move, household influence falls fast.”
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Lentulus frowned.
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“Not if guided correctly.”
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Felix smiled.
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“Then guide quickly.”
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A cook came out the side gate shouting for more flour and cheaper wine.
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The crowd laughed despite itself.
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Secundus said, “Funeral feast underfunded.”
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Crispus muttered, “Indecent.”
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“No,” Felix said. “Informative.”
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Chresimus opened one tablet.
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“The deceased guaranteed two shipping notes personally.”
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All five looked at him.
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“How do you know?” Crispus asked.
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“Because one creditor is here pretending sympathy.”
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Varro scanned the crowd.
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“Which man?”
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“The fattest tears,” Felix said.
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Chresimus did not contradict him.
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Lentulus adjusted his cloak.
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“If the heir needs allies, introductions matter.”
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Felix said, “If the heir needs coin, inventory matters.”
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Crispus said, “If claims emerge, procedure matters.”
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Secundus said, “If staff flee, kitchens and stables matter.”
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Varro said, “If clients leave, visible order matters.”
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Chresimus said, “If no one knows liabilities, numbers matter first.”
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Inside the house, a servant shouted for the family seal.
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The street went still.
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Felix smiled slowly.
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“There.”
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“What?” Varro asked.
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“The true corpse. Authority.”
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Varro stepped toward the entrance.
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“I’ll secure the line and see who still obeys.”
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Secundus moved with him.
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“I’ll speak to stable men before they hire elsewhere.”
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Lentulus straightened.
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“I will offer proper support to the heir.”
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Felix laughed.
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“You will offer yourself.”
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Crispus adjusted his garment.
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“I will determine whether probate begins today.”
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Chresimus tied his tablets tighter.
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“I will learn which debts die with the man and which survive him.”
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Felix turned toward the suppliers.
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“I will buy what the household can no longer afford.”
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He looked back once.
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“Six men. One funeral. None of us discussing sorrow.”
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Varro answered without turning.
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“We are discussing what depended on him.”
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---
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## 3. Choice Presentation
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> The patron is dead. The household still stands. For how long depends on what happens next. Whose reading of the street do you trust?
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| Choice | Background |
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| Follow Varro to preserve order and watch loyalty shift. | Former Legionary |
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| Follow Felix to buy distress and displaced supply. | Freedman Trader |
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| Follow Lentulus to secure access through the heir. | Noble Younger Son |
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| Follow Crispus to exploit inheritance procedure and claims. | Failed Magistrate |
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| Follow Secundus to capture staff, stables, and household operations. | Camp Logistician |
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| Follow Chresimus to uncover debts, guarantees, and the true estate. | Guild Scribe |
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## 4. What This Scene Teaches
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- Patronage is economic infrastructure.
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- A death can instantly destabilize dependents and suppliers.
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- Clients migrate toward future power, not past loyalty.
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- Household competence matters as much as wealth.
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- Inheritance uncertainty creates openings for rivals and creditors.
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- Operations (staff, animals, kitchens, seals) can matter before ceremony ends.
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## 5. Canonical Success Condition
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If the participant stops asking:
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“Who inherits?”
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and starts asking:
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“Who can no longer rely on this house tomorrow?”
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then this dialogue is functioning correctly.
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