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# DIALOGUE-LAW-0010
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## The Broker’s Last Wind — Canonical Draft
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### Status: Canonical Dialogue Draft
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### Layer: OTIVM (Roman Law)
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### Purpose: Scenario teaching uncertain causation, sabotage suspicion, liability without proof, dead witnesses, myth-making after disaster, and how men name hidden causes.
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### Repository Path: docs/scenarios/DIALOGUE-LAW-0010.md
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---
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## 0. Design Intent
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After the crane disaster, the barge captain gives sworn testimony.
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He is experienced, sober, and widely respected. Yet his account sounds absurd: an old broker urged him privately to strike the crane, and though he fought the helm with full strength, his crew became slow, confused, and ineffective without having drunk beforehand. He insists some divine force took command of the vessel.
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The six immediately visit the broker’s shipyard.
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They learn he died quietly the day after making his sixth and final sale.
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No confession exists. No evidence is complete. No court can question the dead.
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Yet the harbor now argues whether the crane fell by fraud, fate, sabotage, wine, herbs, incompetence, or gods.
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Known facts are uncertain:
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- whether the broker planned the collision
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- whether the crew was drugged, exhausted, or merely panicked
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- whether the captain protects his reputation
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- whether estate assets are liable
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- whether proof can ever be assembled
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- whether men prefer myths to mechanisms
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The participant must learn that unexplained outcomes invite stories faster than evidence.
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---
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## 1. Scene Constraints
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Location: old broker’s closed shipyard on the harbor edge, late afternoon.
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Primary signals:
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- yard shutters sealed
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- workers dismissed
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- neighbors sharing rumors
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- captain’s testimony spreading rapidly
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- no living mastermind to question
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- valuable records possibly missing
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Selection method: participant chooses whose interpretation to follow.
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---
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## 2. Opening Scene Draft
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The dead keep business hours badly.
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The broker’s yard gates were shut, though half the harbor stood outside them discussing his schedule with certainty.
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Marcus Atilius Varro stood before the chain across the doors studying hinges, mud, and who avoided eye contact.
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Lucius Fabius Felix arrived smiling like a man offended that a corpse might keep secrets.
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“No fire. No tax raid. No creditors screaming,” Felix said. “Only mystery. Expensive commodity.”
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Varro nodded toward the gathered crowd.
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“Captain testified.”
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“He also survived. Motive enough for poetry.”
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Gaius Licinius Crispus approached carrying tablets and skepticism.
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“The statement was sworn.”
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Felix replied:
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“So are many useful fictions.”
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Crispus ignored him.
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“He says the broker told him to strike the crane,” Varro said.
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“Before departure?”
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“Before mooring.”
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Quintus Cornelius Lentulus Minor arrived in a cloak chosen for solemn curiosity.
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“And then the broker died?”
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“Yesterday,” said Varro.
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Lentulus frowned.
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“Convenient.”
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Titus Varenus Secundus came from the quay side with rope fibers on one hand.
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“I inspected the barge helm,” he said. “Stiff but serviceable.”
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“Sabotaged?” Crispus asked.
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“Maybe neglected. Maybe overloaded. Maybe neither.”
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A quiet voice came from beside the gate ledger box.
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“Excellent. Three truths at once.”
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Publius Terentius Chresimus had already acquired the death notice, inventory seal, and two contradictory witness names.
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Felix sighed.
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“Even mourning receives administration.”
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A fish seller shouted that the broker had always spoken with gulls and numbers.
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The crowd approved both equally.
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Varro asked, “Cause of death?”
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Chresimus replied:
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“Old age, sleep, and excellent timing.”
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Crispus frowned.
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“That is not medical language.”
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“It is market language.”
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A harbor porter swore the crew had moved like men in deep water before the collision.
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Secundus said, “Slow reaction can come from fatigue.”
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Felix said, “Or herbs.”
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Lentulus said, “Or fear.”
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Crispus said, “Or invention.”
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Varro looked toward the shuttered yard.
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“Open it.”
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The estate steward emerged from a side door at once, proving he had been listening.
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“No entry without lawful authority.”
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Felix smiled warmly.
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“We have six opinions and one impatience.”
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Crispus stepped forward.
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“I have standing enough to inspect records tied to public damage.”
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The steward considered resistance, then law, then resistance again.
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He opened the gate.
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Inside, the yard was neat in the way places become when activity ends suddenly.
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Empty racks. Cleared timber lanes. Swept tool benches.
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Too clean.
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Secundus said first:
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“He sold out properly.”
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Chresimus said second:
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“Or removed evidence.”
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Felix said third:
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“I respect either.”
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They entered the office.
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One chair. One chest. One account table. No loose papers.
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Varro checked ash tray remains.
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“Burned recently.”
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Crispus opened the chest.
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Inside were receipts for six sales.
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Each to one of them.
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Felix looked wounded.
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“He remembered us fondly.”
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Lentulus asked, “Anything else?”
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Chresimus lifted a small packet of dried leaves wrapped in cloth.
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No mark.
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Secundus smelled it.
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“Bitter.”
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Felix leaned in.
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“Can it slow men?”
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Secundus shrugged.
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“Can flavor wine. Can calm nerves. Can dull hands if enough.”
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Crispus said sharply:
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“Speculation.”
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“Everything here is.”
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From outside came shouts that the captain had added new detail: the broker told him,
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> Trust the wind more than your men.
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Felix stared upward.
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“A poet assassin.”
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Varro ignored him and examined floor scratches.
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“Something heavy removed yesterday.”
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Chresimus nodded.
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“Records chest likely.”
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Lentulus asked, “If he caused it, why die?”
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Felix replied:
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“Because old men sometimes schedule poorly.”
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Crispus said, “Estate liability depends on proof of intentional harm.”
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Varro asked, “Which we lack.”
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“Entirely.”
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Secundus looked through the rear workshop.
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“No spare tackle left. No rope. No beams.”
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Felix smiled slowly.
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“He sold everything to us.”
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The room absorbed this.
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Chresimus added:
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“And left no competing stock when reconstruction demand arrived.”
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Lentulus said, “You mean he engineered profit from beyond death?”
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Felix answered first.
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“I mean he retired magnificently.”
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A widow from neighboring yard entered uninvited.
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“He said the old crane leaned wrong for ten years.”
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No one dismissed her.
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She continued:
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“He said only disaster makes men rebuild correctly.”
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Then she left, satisfied to have worsened certainty.
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Crispus rubbed his brow.
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“This is unusable.”
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Varro asked, “Meaning?”
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“Legally useless. Intellectually irritating.”
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The six approved that.
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A gull cried overhead.
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Felix looked up.
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“Further testimony.”
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No one indulged him.
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Varro asked quietly, “What matters now?”
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Secundus answered first.
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“Why the crew slowed.”
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Lentulus said, “Whether the city needs a villain.”
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Crispus said, “Whether any claim can survive evidence this thin.”
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Felix said, “Whether genius excuses damage.”
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Chresimus said, “Where the missing records went.”
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They all looked at him.
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“If the chest exists, the dead still speak.”
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Varro stepped toward the rear lane.
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“I’ll find servants who packed yesterday.”
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Secundus moved to the herb packet.
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“I’ll learn what this does.”
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Lentulus adjusted his cloak.
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“I will hear what noble houses already believe.”
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Crispus gathered receipts.
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“I will determine whether belief can be filed.”
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Felix smiled toward the empty chair.
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“I will ask around for old men selling bargains.”
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Chresimus tied the death notice and seal together.
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“I will find the missing ledger.”
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Felix looked back once.
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“Six men. One dead broker. None of us discussing gods.”
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Varro answered without turning.
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“We are discussing names for causes.”
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---
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## 3. Choice Presentation
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> The broker is dead, the crane is gone, and truth has many bidders. Whose reading of the yard do you trust?
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| Choice | Background |
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| Follow Varro to trace servants, movements, and practical evidence. | Former Legionary |
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| Follow Felix to value cunning, rumor, and profitable narratives. | Freedman Trader |
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| Follow Lentulus to track elite belief and political need. | Noble Younger Son |
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| Follow Crispus to test what can actually become a case. | Failed Magistrate |
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| Follow Secundus to examine mechanics, fatigue, and herbs. | Camp Logistician |
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| Follow Chresimus to hunt ledgers, records, and the missing chest. | Guild Scribe |
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---
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## 4. What This Scene Teaches
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- Dead actors often leave unresolved incentives behind.
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- Legal proof and plausible explanation are different things.
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- People prefer dramatic causes to complex mechanisms.
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- Records can matter more than witnesses.
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- Disaster stories quickly become mythology.
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- Uncertainty itself creates opportunity.
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## 5. Canonical Success Condition
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If the participant stops asking:
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“Did the gods do it?”
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and starts asking:
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“What name do men give causes they cannot prove?”
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then this dialogue is functioning correctly.
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