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# DIALOGUE-PROLOGUE-0006
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## The Dockside Brawl — Canonical Draft
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### Status: Canonical Dialogue Draft
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### Layer: OTIVM (Roman Merchant)
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### Purpose: Prologue scenario teaching labor disruption, crew reputation, security premiums, ethnic/social friction, and the economic value of restoring movement after violence.
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### Repository Path: docs/scenarios/DIALOGUE-PROLOGUE-0006.md
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---
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## 0. Design Intent
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A fight breaks out near the Ostian riverfront before dawn.
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No warehouse burns. No cargo vanishes. No official edict is posted.
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Instead, several crews now refuse to unload beside one another, porters avoid one quay, guards demand higher pay, and shipmasters begin asking whether Ostia is safe today.
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Known facts are uncertain:
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- drunken brawl or targeted attack
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- crew rivalry or hired provocation
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- theft covered by violence
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- ethnic insult exaggerated into commercial refusal
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- creditor pressure disguised as public disorder
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- one injured man important enough to matter
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The participant must learn that violence changes prices even when goods remain intact.
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---
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## 1. Scene Constraints
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Location: dockside lane between the riverfront quay, caupona frontage, and porter hiring area in Ostia, late morning.
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Primary signals:
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- blood washed from paving stones
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- one crew refusing to unload
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- porters demanding danger pay
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- guards being hired quietly
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- two shipmasters threatening delay
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- rumors contradicting each other
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Selection method: participant chooses whose interpretation to follow.
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---
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## 2. Opening Scene Draft
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The stones near the quay had been scrubbed badly.
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Water ran pinkish into the gutter where fish scales, spilled wine, and grain dust made a paste under passing sandals. A broken stool lay against the wall of the caupona. Someone had thrown it hard enough to split one leg.
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The ships were still tied. The cargo was still aboard. That was the problem.
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Marcus Atilius Varro stood at the edge of the lane where he could see the quay, the tavern door, and the hiring post for porters.
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Lucius Fabius Felix arrived eating an olive and looking pleased with everything except the price of the olive.
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“You find the best mornings,” Felix said.
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Varro did not look at him.
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“I find stopped work.”
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Felix glanced toward the quay.
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“I heard three men dead.”
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“One badly cut. Two bruised. One missing because he ran.”
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“So only one dead rumor.”
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“No deaths reported.”
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“Then the rumor is still young.”
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Gaius Licinius Crispus approached with his robe gathered high enough to avoid the gutter and low enough to preserve dignity.
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“What happened?”
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Felix answered first.
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“Men disagreed with furniture.”
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Crispus looked at Varro.
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“Before dawn. Caupona. Crewmen from two ships. Porters joined after the second jar broke. One guard struck with his own stick.”
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Crispus frowned.
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“Names?”
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“Names are changing by speaker.”
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Quintus Cornelius Lentulus Minor arrived with a household servant who remained carefully behind him, as if distance could protect status from fish smell.
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“I was told Alexandrians insulted Italians,” Lentulus said.
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Felix laughed.
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“And I was told Campanians insulted Syrians, a Ligurian stabbed a muleteer, and a Greek stole a belt from a dead man who was not dead.”
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Lentulus gave him a flat look.
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“You delight in disorder.”
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“No. Disorder merely confesses faster than respectable men.”
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Titus Varenus Secundus came from the porter line, carrying a length of rope darkened with old grease.
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“Porters want double for that ship,” he said.
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Varro nodded toward the western vessel.
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“Why that one?”
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“Because its crew lost the fight.”
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Felix smiled.
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“So fear has direction.”
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“No,” Secundus said. “Fear has wages.”
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A quiet voice entered from beside the caupona wall.
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“Also debt.”
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Publius Terentius Chresimus stood near a shutter, watching the door instead of the men. His tablet was already marked.
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Felix sighed.
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“Of course. Even a broken stool owes someone money.”
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Chresimus did not smile.
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“The caupona owner has been extending credit to sailors from both vessels. One crew paid yesterday. The other did not.”
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Crispus turned.
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“That changes the nature of the quarrel.”
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“It changes what was already there,” Chresimus said.
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Inside the tavern someone shouted that no more wine would be served on credit.
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The street laughed, then stopped when two guards pushed a man back toward the river.
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Varro watched the guards’ hands.
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“Not enough men.”
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Secundus nodded.
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“Two guards for three crews and idle porters.”
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Felix said, “Enough for appearances. Not enough for bones.”
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Lentulus looked toward the ships.
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“Whose cargo is delayed?”
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Varro pointed.
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“Oil amphorae on the western vessel. Cloth and small sealed crates on the eastern. Grain lighter waiting behind both.”
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Crispus said, “If loading order is disputed, the harbor office must settle it.”
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Felix lifted his hands.
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“The harbor office is deciding whether to arrive after blood dries.”
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Lentulus said, “Someone must restore confidence.”
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Felix looked at him.
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“By standing beautifully near the gutter?”
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“By being seen where common men lost control.”
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“That usually means leaving.”
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Crispus cut in.
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“If this began as unpaid debt, the tavern keeper has a claim. If it began as assault, the injured man has a claim. If cargo delay follows, merchants have claims. All of this can be made orderly.”
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Secundus looked at the idle ships.
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“Not before the porters eat.”
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Varro said, “How many refuse work?”
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“Twenty-eight near the hiring post. Twelve pretending they refuse so they can raise price. Four actually afraid.”
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Felix pointed at him.
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“That is why I respect him. He even counts cowardice by category.”
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Chresimus said, “The shipmaster of the western vessel has borrowed against delivery.”
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Crispus turned again.
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“From whom?”
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Chresimus looked briefly at Lentulus.
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“From a name better spoken indoors.”
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Lentulus’s face did not change.
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“Careful.”
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“I am.”
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Felix smiled softly.
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“That sounded like a cart wheel over a grave.”
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A porter shouted that he would not carry under knives for ordinary pay.
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Another shouted that knives were cheaper than magistrates.
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The crowd approved that more than Crispus preferred.
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Varro stepped closer to the porter line.
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“If they scatter, unloading fails until afternoon.”
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Secundus said, “If afternoon, heat spoils tempers. If tempers spoil, guards cost more. If guards cost more, shipmasters delay. If shipmasters delay, quay space tightens.”
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Felix nodded.
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“And if quay space tightens, men who already unloaded look like prophets.”
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Lentulus looked toward the servant behind him.
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“Send word to my uncle’s steward. Ask whether the western cargo bears any family claim.”
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Felix laughed once.
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“So now the gutter has ancestry.”
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“Everything does, when loss is large enough.”
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Crispus said, “I can summon witnesses from the caupona.”
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“You can summon men who want not to be witnesses,” Felix replied.
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“That is still useful.”
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Chresimus added, “Not if they were paid to see badly.”
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Varro looked toward him.
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“You think staged?”
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“I think the unpaid crew fought after the paying crew announced payment. That may be pride. It may be provocation. It may be a creditor arranging pressure.”
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Felix’s smile widened.
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“A creditor with a stool?”
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“A creditor with a debtor who embarrasses easily,” Chresimus said.
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Secundus rubbed the rope between his fingers.
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“The rope store is still open.”
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Felix blinked.
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“What?”
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“Rope, carrying slings, replacement hooks. If men fear knives, they demand better gear and more hands. The first man selling gear looks honest.”
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Varro nodded once.
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“Secure work teams in pairs. No isolated porters.”
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Crispus said, “Secure testimony first.”
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Lentulus said, “Secure whose cargo must not be named.”
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Felix said, “Secure the cheap labor before fear becomes custom.”
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Chresimus said, “Secure the tavern accounts before they disappear.”
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A boy ran past shouting that the injured man had a patron.
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The quay changed at once. Men who had been laughing began asking who.
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Lentulus turned fully.
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“There it is.”
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Crispus breathed out.
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“Now it becomes dangerous.”
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Felix looked delighted.
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“Now it becomes priced.”
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Varro moved toward the hiring post.
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“I’ll form a guarded work line.”
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Secundus went with him.
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“I’ll choose men who can carry sober.”
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Felix slipped toward the porter crowd.
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“I’ll buy the men who are only pretending fear.”
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Crispus adjusted his robe.
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“I will find the injured man’s statement before someone improves it.”
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Lentulus sent his servant away.
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“I will learn whose patronage has entered the street.”
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Chresimus folded his tablet closed.
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“I will learn who owed enough to make fists useful.”
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Felix looked back once.
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“Six men. One brawl. None of us interested in honor.”
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Varro answered without turning.
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“We are interested in what stopped moving when honor arrived.”
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---
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## 3. Choice Presentation
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> The blood is nearly washed away. The cargo has not moved. Whose reading of the dockside do you trust?
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| Choice | Background |
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| Follow Varro to restore movement through guarded work lines. | Former Legionary |
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| Follow Felix to buy labor before fear becomes expensive. | Freedman Trader |
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| Follow Lentulus to learn which patronage has entered the quarrel. | Noble Younger Son |
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| Follow Crispus to capture claims, testimony, and liability. | Failed Magistrate |
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| Follow Secundus to secure crews, gear, rope, and safe unloading order. | Camp Logistician |
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| Follow Chresimus to trace debts behind the violence. | Guild Scribe |
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## 4. What This Scene Teaches
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- Violence affects commerce even when cargo is intact.
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- Labor confidence is an economic variable.
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- Reputation of crews, taverns, and patrons changes work availability.
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- Security cost can rise faster than cargo value changes.
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- Ethnic or crew rivalry may hide debt, theft, or creditor pressure.
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- Restoring movement may be more profitable than identifying guilt.
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## 5. Canonical Success Condition
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If the participant stops asking:
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“Who started the fight?”
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and starts asking:
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“What will not move until men feel safe enough to lift it?”
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then this dialogue is functioning correctly.
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